Video Game Thesis
Thesis: Persuasive and Adver games both wish to sell either their products or views, and its the colorful and outrageous characters of these games that assume the roles of salesmen and sell their product to the tailored audience.
I. Intro
A. Introduce Dinohunters and Darfur is Dying and explain the thesis.
II. Body 1 (Dinohunters characters) explain how each character draws in and sells the product.
A. Candy
B. Roger Wallaby
C. Harlan Davis
D. Shaw
III. Body 2 (Darfur is Dying) explain how the characters draw in and sell the view to the audience.
A. explain se of children characters
B. show the characters impact on the audience
IV. Body 3 Compare and contrast how these games use their characters invoke aimed emotions on the audience.
V. Closing. Summarize and complete
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4 comments:
That sounds like a really interesting topic, how the characters assume the roles of sales people. I've always looked at it as if there's some unseen force (like the asthetics of the game or some kind of subliminal advertising) pushing the product on you, rather than the characters themselves. Maybe as well as comparing/contrasting the games and how their characters work to sell the product, you can compare/contrast them with everyday salespeople?
I liked your thesis, it had a nice hook to it. In your thesis, you didn't quite discuss what two games you were talking about and I found that to be interesting. It left me wanting to ride on. The point where you're talking about how the characters assume the roles of people, is a very true statement. I believe advertising companies do that so the reader can get the feel of reality.
The thesis to the essay is well written and organized. By reading the thesis it draws in the reader attention. The topic sounds very interesting and grasp attention. The outline is well organized and answers questions that should be answered throughout the paper.
Your thesis is well written, and the outline is very informative. I like your comparative anaylsis between both games. You might want to discuss both of your games within the introduction paragraph, in order to allow the reader more insight about the games.
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